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i want to know your opinion of this poem,,ive gotten a few bad opinions,,tell me the truth ,,am i walking on some peoples toes?
lonely.com: people resort to the internet when they have nothing else to do some come hoping to be amused when they feel down and blue some come to escape lonelyness standing lifes door they pretray the need of friendship secretly wanting more some times its remarkable to find a friend or two its a great feeling to share a laugh or joke about the silly things you do some people are left in constant heartbreak feeling more empty then before makes us more aware of who controls are heartstrings when lonelyness knocks at lifes door..
i want you to see in my eyes when i'm nowhere in sight i want your body to crave me wanting to hold me tight i want your lips to taste the sweetness of our last senuous kiss i want to be the name you call the love you'll always miss i want the scent of our passion to forever remain upon your skin i want the flames of your desires to never come to end if that day should ever come and we go our separate way i dont want to be the love you lost just that unexplainable wanting through out every day
daddy do you love me? i love you more than you'll ever know how much daddy do you love me? with all my heart and all my soul when i get bigger , will you love me then? son i will love you ,even when you become a man what if i left and you were all alone? i'd come and get you son , i'd bring you back home what if someone tried to hurt me , with a gun or a knife? i would protect you son, i'd give up my life what if i went to the army , where i could fight? you would be protecting your country son,and thats your right i never want to die daddy , i want to stay here with you yes son , God knows this because he loves you too
i wonder if he knows just how much i loved him how good he made me feel he was never just one of those guys or just some time i wanted to kill just the mere mention of his name gives me such a thrill eventho we will never again speak in my heart i love him still i have memory of the times we shared i know that i always will most of our talks were laughs and jokes not saying what we felt inside i pretended well not to love him but wanting him i could not hide ill spend the rest of my life thinking about him and i'll smile at some things he said alot of things i wanted to say but those words will never be read i know someday we'll look in the sky and view the same shining star and i'll be thinking to myself "baby you're my special wish , no matter where you are"
why do people live in a house of abuse why do we try to when a heart when theres no use why is there jealously in a secure person's mind why do we search forever and never find why is there hell below us and heaven above why do we always hurt the ones that we love why do we fall in love and say its pretend how can we become lovers and never end as friends why did God send his only son to save a world full of sinners why is the person standing after a fight always called the winner why are we loved by our enemies right before we die why do we avoid the truth by covering it with a lie why do we close our eyes during a passionate kiss why do we leave someone that we know we'll always miss why is some people's happiness gained by other people's sorrow why do we put off everything today until tomorrow
just because i fall in a trance ,when someone speaks your name doesn't mean i want you back , you were just a game just because i sit by the phone ,and wait for your call doesn't mean i love you ,i don't like you at all just because i wonder what your doing,every minute of the day doesn't mean i care about you ,at all in anyway just because i linger for the taste of your kiss doesn't mean i want you, you're not even missed just because i would die, to have your body next to mine doesn't mean you're special, you're not even on my mind just because i lay at night and sometimes cry doesn't mean i need you, that would be a lie just because i hold on to every memory of you doesn't mean you're all that , you haven't got a clue just because when you walk past, i fall apart doesn't mean you hurt me , you didn't even break my heart just because i would melt at the sound of your voice doesn't mean my world revolved around you believing it ,,,would be your choice
the man i love would miss me when i'm gone correct me when i'm wrong the man i love would read my body like a book know what i'm thinking with just one look the man i love would never stand in my way before i leave ask me to stay the man i love would never raise his voice would not always agree but respect my choice the man i love would take my hand whisper in my ear that hes my man the man i love would kiss me in the rain be so hot in bed that he drives me insane the man i love would have an interest in what i said would never limit lovemaking just to the bed the man i love would never fail to tell me how he feels when he says he loves me i know its for real the man i love would always talk dirty during sex never quite or secretive or some shit like "complexed" the man i love would give me passionate stares across a crowded room spontanously take me away where our passion can resume the man i love would be alittle rough in the sack hes only position wouldn't be him on his back the man i love wouldn't be controlled by masculine fears his only proof wouldn't be a woman in tears
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